Food that is said to be insalubrious and with low alimentation content are categorizes as junk food (Smith 2005, p.3). Based on statistics made by Australian Nutrition Journal (2004), most Australian children take foods rich in fat and sugar more than recommended intake which most of the foods are junk food. This has become an issue in Australia as it is being alleged as major factors of childhood obesity (Weekend News 2005, p.6). Consequently, an idea of restricting the selling of junk foods in school canteens is propound. I strongly agree with that as I firmly believe that the habit of eating junk food can leads to behavioural problem, exacerbate a person's health and cause increment in litter conundrum.
First factor that leads me to support my notion is that the habit of eating junk food can caused attitude problems among the children. This is further explained by Smith (2009), whereby he states that most chemical additives within junk food could cause children to be hyperactive and a lapse in concentration. Besides that, according to Green (2005), as a teacher he can see that removing junk food from his school canteen results in amelioration of student's behaviour in class. They became much calmer after their lunch. Thus, selling of junk food in school canteen should be banned for the sake of student's benefits.
Second factor is the habit of binge on junk food also detrimental to health. Selling of junk food in school canteen actually leads tot he problem of childhood obesity which can result in future efects such as heart disease, osteoarthritis and some cancers (Weekend News 2005, p.6). Studies had been done and they conclude that the most popular snack foods are under the categories of low nutritional value (Health Foundation 2005). If the selling is to be continued, students cannot get the nutrients required for healthy growth and development (Cray 2005). "...decline in the dental health of Australia's primary-school children' (Weekend News 2005, p.6) is also one of the concern regarding the negative effects of eating junk foods. In short, to improve on the students' learning potential, the school canteen should be prohibited from selling unwholesome foods and drinks.
Lastly, the habit of eating junk foods is not beneficial to the students and also it affects the school in the sense of litter problem. This is further justified by Smith (2005), whereby he stated that snack food packaging is found out to be major contributor to litter problem in school. This will leads to hike in cleaning cost for the school plus eroding the good image of the communities. Removing the selling of junk foods in other ways can benefits the school as the workers will spend less time cleaning the grounds and more time for other productive purposes (Green 2005). Hence, it is cogent argument for the school to disallow the selling of junk foods in school canteen.
All in all, selling of junk foods in school canteen should be banned for these three indisputable facts, it will caused behavioural problem and aggravates the children's health and also brings litter problem to the school. As students spend most of their time in school instead of home, the school's authority should plat their role in educating the students towards a healthy lifestyle. Hence, I strongly stand on my notion that selling of junk food in school canteen should be prohibited.
First factor that leads me to support my notion is that the habit of eating junk food can caused attitude problems among the children. This is further explained by Smith (2009), whereby he states that most chemical additives within junk food could cause children to be hyperactive and a lapse in concentration. Besides that, according to Green (2005), as a teacher he can see that removing junk food from his school canteen results in amelioration of student's behaviour in class. They became much calmer after their lunch. Thus, selling of junk food in school canteen should be banned for the sake of student's benefits.
Second factor is the habit of binge on junk food also detrimental to health. Selling of junk food in school canteen actually leads tot he problem of childhood obesity which can result in future efects such as heart disease, osteoarthritis and some cancers (Weekend News 2005, p.6). Studies had been done and they conclude that the most popular snack foods are under the categories of low nutritional value (Health Foundation 2005). If the selling is to be continued, students cannot get the nutrients required for healthy growth and development (Cray 2005). "...decline in the dental health of Australia's primary-school children' (Weekend News 2005, p.6) is also one of the concern regarding the negative effects of eating junk foods. In short, to improve on the students' learning potential, the school canteen should be prohibited from selling unwholesome foods and drinks.
Lastly, the habit of eating junk foods is not beneficial to the students and also it affects the school in the sense of litter problem. This is further justified by Smith (2005), whereby he stated that snack food packaging is found out to be major contributor to litter problem in school. This will leads to hike in cleaning cost for the school plus eroding the good image of the communities. Removing the selling of junk foods in other ways can benefits the school as the workers will spend less time cleaning the grounds and more time for other productive purposes (Green 2005). Hence, it is cogent argument for the school to disallow the selling of junk foods in school canteen.
All in all, selling of junk foods in school canteen should be banned for these three indisputable facts, it will caused behavioural problem and aggravates the children's health and also brings litter problem to the school. As students spend most of their time in school instead of home, the school's authority should plat their role in educating the students towards a healthy lifestyle. Hence, I strongly stand on my notion that selling of junk food in school canteen should be prohibited.
2 comments:
- First line: please check the word 'alimentation'.
- First line: ...content is categorized as junk food (Smith 2005, p.3).
- you do not have to mention the page no. here unless you have used quotation marks (this has become an issue in Australia as it is being alleged as major factors of childhood obesity (Weekend News 2005, p.6)
- habit of eating junk food can cause....
- Third para: leads to the problem
- you have used different fonts I guess, please check.
- Good work. Sounds convincing. Please get a print-out for the file.
about the fonts, yeah.. i don't know why but i always face problem to post sth in my blog. they said it got sth wrong with the html but i don't understand it.. ~.~
maybe i need to change my blog's setting..
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